The student's essay was badly written. Moreover, it was too short. Using "moreover" we both add info and support our argument. In other words being "too short" is related to the "badly written essay" somewhat. Reading is an excellent way to increase your vocabulary. Furthermore, it can also help you improve your grammar. We just add info. More @Wikipedia
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